Now for fifteen minutes write a first person account of being in this scene. Maybe you are on one of the boats or islands. Maybe you are in town. Maybe you are the ploughman or the shepherd. Let this be a paragraph of 4-6 sentences.
I was walking with me sheep on a warm and sunny day. Not far away from me there was a man ploughing the land with his donkey. I couldn’t concentrate on my sheep, because of the screaming donkey who was ploughing the land. Not far away I saw a huge boat, sailing slowly on the sea. There was also a child drowning in the sea, and not far away was a fisherman fishing with his rod. In the sea, there were many other boats and a castle. Far away there was an ancient city and some cliffs. By Denis.
Let’s imagine that I’m in the picture. And I’m a captain of the big ship.
We are sailing from Sicily to that island with a lot of food. There are a lot of rocks in the sea. So it’s very dangerous to swim. But my sailors are very skilled and brave. We had a lot of travels before. And fortunately the sun is shining and we can see the rocks. In this day the sea is calm and quiet. And people are already waiting for us on the bank.
The picture (as a pirate on the boat) “Walk the plank young boy.” I demanded the boy “No, I will not.” He replied “You will.” I screamed. Suddenly, he drew out his sword and then I drew out my gun. Bang, Bang, I shot 70 missiles at him. He blocked all my shots, then from no were, he came flying at me at top speed. Suddenly, I got knocked of the boat and then I saw a shark fin swimming towards me. I swam and swan towards the land. Suddenly, Icarus feel on to me, then the shark at bother of us.
Empathy I’m the fisher man in this picture. One day I was sitting on the beach with my rod when I saw a naked person dived in to the water. Also I was sitting there to see the sunset. It was beautiful. The big bout was just about to leave. I hear the sheep all around me and that was scary because I don’t like sheep.
Empathy. I am the fisher man in this ancient picture. I was just about to catch a big fish when I saw a naked person drowning. He was splashing all over the place, causing my fish to swim away. Now I was going to have to catch another fish. I needed to catch a fish because then I couldn’t sell anything at the market. I was a poor man. I was wearing my wife’s old Dress. It stank of old fish. That’s how poor I was! Oh dear, oh dear, I am never going to get any money.
In this picture I am the man who is fishing I was fishing in the morning as I normally do and I saw a girl who was plowing with her horse. I really wanted a fish today because I need it for lunch. There were two sailing boats and one sailing boat was leaving the island. The sea was very strong today I haven’t caught any fish because of the sea. It was a nice morning quite sunny. There was a man looking down
One day I parked in the middle of the shallow water. I saw a man fishing for fish, he caught so much fish. I also saw so many boats in the deeper water. I saw a woman walking with her horse and a wagon. I also saw a man with one big stick and a lot of sheep near the shore. I also saw a man jumping from a rock.
One day i was ploughing my field with my horse, which is near the sea. There was a huge ship,which i was wondering what is was doing there... There was also a fisherman falling asleep next to the water.The sun was going down.. Then i saw my neighbour the man with the goats trying to get them all in a pen.Then I thought i saw a guys hand sticking out the water. But then i looked away and i looked back but it was gone.....
I am the man in the picture. I was farming one day on my piece of land when suddenly there was a giant splash. I continued working. My wife was working as well as she was pushing a cart. My sheep were snacking at my trousers as I watched my beautiful wife. Wait what was this? A shadow? No it was a man! I couldn’t believe my eyes! “Wife did you see that, that thing?” “No husband I was too busy pushing this darn cart!” I couldn’t be going crazy! Surely NOT! I shall go see the mental, I mean head doctor tomorrow.
I am a man in the largist boat and am putting up the sail to head out to sea to find some treasure.I am on the deck pulling up the anker.I am felling very exited as I have never fond treasure before.I am alos sared as I have no idae what I could see.
I am a shepherd and I am herding about 30 or more sheep a day and I am delivering the sheep to the farm. I will be doing the same thing for the week then I will herd the cattle to graze so they can get plump. I will also be doing the pigs next month.
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ReplyDeleteI was walking with me sheep on a warm and sunny day. Not far away from me there was a man ploughing the land with his donkey. I couldn’t concentrate on my sheep, because of the screaming donkey who was ploughing the land. Not far away I saw a huge boat, sailing slowly on the sea. There was also a child drowning in the sea, and not far away was a fisherman fishing with his rod. In the sea, there were many other boats and a castle. Far away there was an ancient city and some cliffs.
By Denis.
Empathy
ReplyDeleteLet’s imagine that I’m in the picture. And I’m a captain of the big ship.
We are sailing from Sicily to that island with a lot of food. There are a lot of rocks in the sea. So it’s very dangerous to swim. But my sailors are very skilled and brave. We had a lot of travels before. And fortunately the sun is shining and we can see the rocks. In this day the sea is calm and quiet. And people are already waiting for us on the bank.
By Michael
The picture (as a pirate on the boat)
ReplyDelete“Walk the plank young boy.” I demanded the boy
“No, I will not.” He replied
“You will.” I screamed. Suddenly, he drew out his sword and then I drew out my gun. Bang, Bang, I shot 70 missiles at him. He blocked all my shots, then from no were, he came flying at me at top speed. Suddenly, I got knocked of the boat and then I saw a shark fin swimming towards me. I swam and swan towards the land. Suddenly, Icarus feel on to me, then the shark at bother of us.
Empathy
ReplyDeleteI’m the fisher man in this picture.
One day I was sitting on the beach with my rod when I saw a naked person dived in to the water. Also I was sitting there to see the sunset. It was beautiful. The big bout was just about to leave. I hear the sheep all around me and that was scary because I don’t like sheep.
BY ALBERT
Empathy.
ReplyDeleteI am the fisher man in this ancient picture.
I was just about to catch a big fish when I saw a naked person drowning. He was splashing all over the place, causing my fish to swim away. Now I was going to have to catch another fish. I needed to catch a fish because then I couldn’t sell anything at the market. I was a poor man. I was wearing my wife’s old Dress. It stank of old fish. That’s how poor I was! Oh dear, oh dear, I am never going to get any money.
In this picture I am the man who is fishing
ReplyDeleteI was fishing in the morning as I normally do and I saw a girl who was plowing with her horse. I really wanted a fish today because I need it for lunch. There were two sailing boats and one sailing boat was leaving the island. The sea was very strong today I haven’t caught any fish because of the sea. It was a nice morning quite sunny. There was a man looking down
I'm the captain
ReplyDeleteOne day I parked in the middle of the shallow water. I saw a man fishing for fish, he caught so much fish. I also saw so many boats in the deeper water. I saw a woman walking with her horse and a wagon. I also saw a man with one big stick and a lot of sheep near the shore. I also saw a man jumping from a rock.
I think this is a really nice painting
Empathy On the Picture
ReplyDeleteOne day i was ploughing my field with my horse, which is near the sea. There was a huge ship,which i was wondering what is was doing there... There was also a fisherman falling asleep next to the water.The sun was going down.. Then i saw my neighbour the man with the goats trying to get them all in a pen.Then I thought i saw a guys hand sticking out the water. But then i looked away and i looked back but it was gone.....
I like this painting.
By : Celine Schmid
I am the man in the picture. I was farming one day on my piece of land when suddenly there was a giant splash. I continued working. My wife was working as well as she was pushing a cart. My sheep were snacking at my trousers as I watched my beautiful wife. Wait what was this? A shadow? No it was a man! I couldn’t believe my eyes! “Wife did you see that, that thing?” “No husband I was too busy pushing this darn cart!” I couldn’t be going crazy! Surely NOT! I shall go see the mental, I mean head doctor tomorrow.
ReplyDeleteI am a man in the largist boat and am putting up the sail to head out to sea to find some treasure.I am on the deck pulling up the anker.I am felling very exited as I have never fond treasure before.I am alos sared as I have no idae what I could see.
ReplyDeleteI am a shepherd and I am herding about 30 or more sheep a day and I am delivering the sheep to the farm. I will be doing the same thing for the week then I will herd the cattle to graze so they can get plump. I will also be doing the pigs next month.
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